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The Beast

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"Ssssuffer, mortal..."
The hissing cries of pain and madness seize her for their own,
Like some epic battle over a worthless castle,
She gulps, desperately trying to escape,
But in her mind she knows she can't.
These voices have become too strong, and she's too weak to resist.
Her sobbing cries are unheard as the massive behemoth
That is within snakes around her,
Choking her...
Until she can no longer...
Feel pain.
I was in an emo poetry type of mood xP
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Wanderhome's avatar
Emoness aside, you have a high ratio of italics to normal text. If you overuse them like that, they stop giving emphasis and start to just be annoying.